Uljhan

 

सभी चाहते हैं मेरा एक हिस्सा उनके लिये,
में कब पाऊँ कुछ अपने लियेजीवन है मेरा,
किंतु महत्व किसी और का
विचार हैं मेरे,
परंतु आचार किसी और सा

तस्वीर बनाना चाहूँ
तो मन के रंग न भर पाऊँ
गीत गाना चाहूँ,
तो अपनी धुन न रच पाऊँ

कैद हूँ मैं,
जैसे एक अदृश्य से पिंजरे में
मेहंदी हूँ जैसे,
जीवन सार्थक है पिसने में

तोडना है मुझे,
इन बेडियों को अपने पाँव से
अर्थ पाना है खुद का,
सँसार कि धूप-छाँव में

सभी चाहते हैं मेरा एक हिस्सा उनके लिये,
में कब पाऊँ कुछ अपने लिये

Sabhee chhahte hain mera ek hissa unke liye,
Mein kab paaoon kuchh apne liyeJeevan hai mera,
Kintu mahatv kisee aur ka
Vichaar hain mere,
Parantu aachaar kisee aur sa

Tasveer banana chaahoon,
To man ke rang na bhar paoon
Geet gaana chaahoon,
To apnee dhun na rach paoon

Kaid hoon mein,
Jaise ek adrishya se pinjre mein
Mehndee hoon jaise,
Jeevan sarthak hai pisne mein

Todna hai mujhe,
In bediyon ko apne paanv se
Arth paana hai,
Khud ka, sansaar ki dhoop-chhaon mein

Sabhee chhahte hain mera ek hissa unke liye,
Mein kab paaoon kuchh apne liye

 

 

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13 responses to “Uljhan

  1. I’m speechless.

    You made me clean bold with your words yaar. Ab tak kyon nahin post karti thi?

  2. Yeh hindi kavita ka bhoot aape kabse savar ho gaya… 😛

    Achee hain kaafi aur ek hindustani aurat/ladki ke manusthiti ko bahut achee se prateet keeya hain chann shabdon main. Sabse achee pankityan humein yeh waali lagee,

    “Kaid hoon mein,
    Jaise ek adrishya se pinjre mein
    Mehndee hoon jaise,
    Jeevan sarthak hai pisne mein”

    Mehndee toh pisne ke baad hee rang laate hain, sahi baat hain.

  3. @ anonymous,

    hindi mein type karne ka zariya nahin tha… isiliye nahin karti thi… ab hindikalam.com par aasaanee se ho jaata hai…

    thanks for liking the poem…

  4. @ Ricky,

    Hindi kavita ka bhoot bahut purana hai, bas aaj kal aasaani se type karke post kar sakti hoon…. isiliye ek ke baad ek torture posts aa rahen hain! lol

    thanks for liking it 🙂

  5. You have forgotten that once I had sent you an email how to type in devnagari. Seems you didn’t find that friendly. I don’t like to use uni type fonts (because we have to type in roman not the basic type system as we use for English font). And we can’t read it if we have window version. It’s compatible only for EXP.

  6. हमने आपको एक पत्री भेजी है । किरपया उसका जवाब भेज दीजीयीगा । धनयवाद ।

  7. Kya baat hai , ek ke baad ek ke baad ek…

    The poem is good, but i somehow didnt too identify with the theme. Seemed a bit stereotypical and simplistic.

  8. aachi poem hai

  9. Navjot Kashyap

    Very beautiful poem.. Time for next post …

  10. amazing….

    my thots put down in words….

    my feelings…..

    just amzing

    bought tears to my eyes…

  11. its a beautiful poem Anks! I love reading Hindi especially because I get so little of it to read nowadays! I dont know what to say about the theme but its just so real!

  12. Where r u? Disappeared again?!

  13. @ DJ, Ankur, Navy, KJ & Kaushie,

    Thanks a lot for liking the poem….

    I know I disappeared from the blog scene and an update is due very soon… will be back with a new post asap… keep watching this space till then!

    🙂

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